Okay, so this is my personal opinion to this year' Big Bang.
It is disappointing((
So far, there are three or four stories I've enjoyed to read.
If you write smth for BB, it should be not just a decent story, but a good one. This is a whole point of BB.
Yeah, your story has been posted at this community, but it doesn't mean it is good, the community doesn't make your story better.