I find it really weird when ppl make a post just to point out how much they didn't like the story.
So, let me get this straight.
You read the whole story, which is not short, and you don't like it, but you still read it till the end.
And then, you waste your time to explain why you didn't like the story.
Something is definitely wrong with this scenario.
Are you getting paid for this?! Or you're getting off on explaining that someone wrote smth shitty?!